Preethan
Post this in a new blogpost on your Media blog called
‘Blog feedback and Learner Response’ then complete the LR tasks/questions
below.
WWW- The Photoshop work on your Fruit bowl is very
creative but a lot of blue used!
EBI- There are two major aspects you need to work on to
accelerate your progress in Media. Firstly, your written English MUST improve
significantly. In your introductory post, you use ‘u’ for ‘you’ and you need to
proof read your Incredibles film poster analysis as some of your sentences
don’t even make sense. ‘Tis’ is inadequate level for GCSE. You are missing your
own advert analysis for denotation and connotation. There are far too many
errors in spelling, punctuation and grammar in your work so far. It is vital in
EVERY piece of writing you produce that capital letters and full stops are used
accurately. Secondly, you must add much more depth to your media analysis. This
means writing paragraphs rather than sentences. For example, on the Doctor Who
clip analysis, you only offer simple analysis. You need to add WHY the elements
you have chosen are interesting for audiences.
LR: Complete and post all missing work urgently: your own
advert analysed. You also need to re-do your analysis of the Doctor Who clip
and use specific examples from the clip to illustrate your ideas. Then, reflect
on your first month of Media. What do you feel is your strongest piece of work
so far? What is your weakest? What specific skills or knowledge do you need to
develop over the rest of the course? How can you improve the depth and detail
of your media analysis?
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