October assessment learner response

1.
WWW-I think you mostly understand what the question are asking and you pick out examples from the text.
EBI-Your literacy (written English) must be more accurate (spelling + grammar)you want to take GCSES. Sometimes your literacy abscures your intended meaning so your answers don't make sense.This costs you a lot marks.Accuracy is important.

2.
Q1. 0
Q2. 1
Q3. 1
Q4. 1
Q5.0
Q6.2
Q7.
A.0
B.1
Q8.1
Q9.2

I have lost a lot of marks because i haven't used a lot media terminology and i most of my work does not make scene.

Q3.I haven't used connotation

Q4. I can identify medium shot but i need to add more information.

Q5. Question 7A i got low marks on this question because my whole paragraph did not make scene.

Q6. They use children in adverts because older people fell more bad for them that they would for older people .Another reason they use kids is because kids have a longer and better future than older people.If you link this to the water aid advert they people feel like those in that country need more toilets.

Another reason they use children is because sometime they do not know what they are doing.If you see a small child about to cross and there was a old lady you most likely will pick the baby up because they are more vulnerable.

We can link this to the water aid advert because they have used a little kid who looks poor and dirty.This shows that he has not had bath and older people (mum) would want to donate some money so that they could afford to get some water to bath and drink.