January assessment: learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).

2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Write down the mark you achieved for each question:

Q1:0
Q2:0
Q3:0
Q4:2

Where you didn't achieve full marks, write WHY you think you missed out on the extra marks. Use the indicative content suggestions in the mark scheme to help with this.

3) Did you get any media terminology wrong in the assessment? Make a note of it here for future revision:

4) Look specifically at question 3 - did you successfully write about both the preferred and oppositional readings? Did your answers match any in the mark scheme?

5) Re-draft your answer to Q3. Use the indicative content suggestions in the mark scheme to write a top-level answer on your blog.

Note: If you already achieved 6+ marks for Q3 then write an additional paragraph exploring the negotiated reading for this advertisement.


1)www-you give some examples for music industry develop this.
    ebi-Not clear argument or structure in essay you haven't answered the question at all and your written english in poor and not GCSE standared. :(

3)I have not used any media terminolgy in assessment.Convention,subversive,established,reinforce and signify.

4)I have successfully wrote about preferred and optional but not in the correct way because i have not used enough media terminolgy.

5)The oppositional reading for this would be the womens might get oppended because of the lack of feminity in the advert.They may think that the woman does not promote working because you would have to be wearing work clothes and shoes.

The prefered reading for this would be that womens are showed as strong and independent.Rolling up her seleve connotes that she is ready for hard work.Her biceps show that she is very musculer.Her clenched fist shows that she is strong and tough.

film industry CPS INDRODUCTION

Denotation
In this picture the background is a dark grey colour which shows that the man might be a sad person.The clothes that he is wearing is dirty and tatty shows that he is poor and can not afford good new clothes.His facial expression and his fist in the air shows that he might want debate about homelessness.

Connotation
This film might be about how homelessness should not be a thing.This is shown with the graffiti on the wall is illegal.Another reason is that the man clothes look like what homeless people would wear because of how dirty.His fist in the air indicates that he wants freedom and the rights to live in good facilities.

Mise-en-scene
The tatty clothes show he is (poor) show that he is a stereotype towards poor people.

The lighting is very dull and dim shows that he is in a boring area.

Daniel looks like a old man in his 50s.

'Representation

Look at the film poster for Kidulthood above and answer the following questions on your blog:

1) List the people, places and groups represented in the poster. 

2) Are there any stereotypes you can identify?

3) What is the preferred reading of this poster?

4) What is the oppositional reading of this poster?

Extension: Find your own choice of film poster and answer the four questions above for your chosen media text. 

1)There are 7 teenagers from a urban area .It is a diverse poster because there is a representation of diffrent race.

2)They look like they are in a gang.Black kids are normally shown by the media as dangerous there for they are conventional.

3)The oppositinal reading for this poster is that.This is a group of teenagers that could be dangerous and haven't been raised properly.This is because when they were born they could have lived in a ruff place e.g estates there for you would not want to watch this film.

4)The prefered reading for this is that these kids are just trying to act cool.The boy that is holding the bat represents that he could violent and dangerous and he could be the leader of this gang.