Statement of intent LR

1) Read your feedback carefully and then write a summary of it in your own words using WWW / EBI.

www-I have written a straight not a very complicated statement of intent using obvious use of how I can and will use camera angles and shots and the use of props.

EBI-I would have to improve the use of media terminology because I don’t use it much .I should explain why I will be using this setting, props, camera shots and costume. I haven’t shown how this product will appeal to my target audience and why it will.

2) Do you need to make any changes to your narrative? Why? I would need to make a change to my product from sure to lynx because more teenagers use lynx. This would help my target audience because this advert is mainly aimed at teenagers

3) How can you improve the use of media terminology in your Statement of Intent? I should use more uses of gratifications. E.g narrative.

4) Representation and stereotyping was a weakness in some drafts. How will you address the key concept of representation in your next draft? The representation would be that it shows how some people can judge them by just how they look because before character used not wear any deodorant and no one like him. But as soon as he started wearing deodorant he became one of the most popular boy in the school.                                                             

5) Finally, think about audience. Why would the target audience (14-18 year olds) enjoy your advert? They would enjoy this advert because It has a very strong narrative and they would like how cheap this spray is.