1) Read your feedback carefully and then write a summary of
it in your own words using WWW / EBI.
www-I have written a straight not a very
complicated statement of intent using obvious use of how I can and will use
camera angles and shots and the use of props.
EBI-I would have to improve the use of
media terminology because I don’t use it much .I should explain why I will be
using this setting, props, camera shots and costume. I haven’t shown how this
product will appeal to my target audience and why it will.
2) Do you need to make any changes to your narrative? Why? I
would need to make a change to my product from sure to lynx because more
teenagers use lynx. This would help my target audience because this advert is
mainly aimed at teenagers
3) How can you improve the use of media terminology in your
Statement of Intent? I should use more uses of gratifications. E.g narrative.
4) Representation and stereotyping was a weakness in some
drafts. How will you address the key concept of representation in your next
draft? The representation would be that it shows how some people can judge them
by just how they look because before character used not wear any deodorant and
no one like him. But as soon as he started wearing deodorant he became one of
the most popular boy in the school.
5) Finally, think about audience. Why would the target
audience (14-18 year olds) enjoy your advert? They would enjoy this advert
because It has a very strong narrative and they would like how cheap this spray
is.
